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title: The best trick is to read your work aloud, even in a whisper: your e… — Editing and redrafting · tree and pragmatics
description: The best trick is to read your work aloud, even in a whisper: your ear trips over the gap where "the" is missing long before your eyes notice it. Who acts: best trick, ear, the, eyes. A sentence of the lesson «Editing and redrafting» of the english course of Mova's primary school with its dependency
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# Editing and redrafting, sentence 2

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The best trick is to read your work aloud, even in a whisper: your ear trips over the gap where "the" is missing long before your eyes notice it.

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**Who acts:** best trick, ear, the, eyes, your · **What happens:** be, trip, miss, notice, work · **To what, where:** whisper, gap, ear

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This is a sentence of the lesson «Editing and redrafting» of the english course of Mova's primary school. The page gives its syntax tree — a dependency tree in the style of Universal Dependencies — and its pragmatics clause by clause: who acts (best trick, ear, the, eyes), what happens, when and where, as Mova's frames read it from the tree.

## The tree {#tree}

```conllu
# sent_id = school:english:043-editing-and-redrafting.lesson:2
# text = The best trick is to read your work aloud, even in a whisper: your ear trips over the gap where "the" is missing long before your eyes notice it.
# source = school lesson (ours)
# course = english
# lesson = 043-editing-and-redrafting.lesson
# annotation = Mova annot: Rust (en) → Haiku 5.5 (medium, Batches API) patches; gates UD 2.18; agreed by treeagree rules (Stanza, Trankit, spaCy trf): R6-punct-agree ×1
1	The	the	DET	DT	Definite=Def|PronType=Art	3	det	_	_
2	best	good	ADJ	JJS	Degree=Sup	3	amod	_	_
3	trick	trick	NOUN	NN	Number=Sing	6	nsubj	_	_
4	is	be	AUX	VBZ	Mood=Ind|Number=Sing|Person=3|Tense=Pres|VerbForm=Fin	6	cop	_	_
5	to	to	PART	TO	_	6	mark	_	_
6	read	read	VERB	VB	VerbForm=Inf	0	root	_	_
7	your	your	PRON	PRP$	Case=Gen|Person=2|Poss=Yes|PronType=Prs	8	nmod:poss	_	_
8	work	work	NOUN	NN	Number=Sing	6	obj	_	_
9	aloud	aloud	ADV	RB	_	6	advmod	_	_
10	,	,	PUNCT	,	_	14	punct	_	_
11	even	even	ADV	RB	_	14	advmod	_	_
12	in	in	ADP	IN	_	14	case	_	_
13	a	a	DET	DT	Definite=Ind|PronType=Art	14	det	_	_
14	whisper	whisper	NOUN	NN	Number=Sing	6	obl	_	_
15	:	:	PUNCT	:	_	18	punct	_	_
16	your	your	PRON	PRP$	Case=Gen|Person=2|Poss=Yes|PronType=Prs	17	nmod:poss	_	_
17	ear	ear	NOUN	NN	Number=Sing	18	nsubj	_	_
18	trips	trip	VERB	VBZ	Mood=Ind|Number=Sing|Person=3|Tense=Pres|VerbForm=Fin	6	parataxis	_	_
19	over	over	ADP	IN	_	21	case	_	_
20	the	the	DET	DT	Definite=Def|PronType=Art	21	det	_	_
21	gap	gap	NOUN	NN	Number=Sing	18	obl	_	_
22	where	where	ADV	WRB	PronType=Rel	27	advmod	_	_
23	"	"	PUNCT	``	_	24	punct	_	Agree=R6-punct-agree|Haiku=27:punct
24	the	the	DET	DT	Definite=Def|PronType=Art	27	nsubj	_	_
25	"	"	PUNCT	''	_	24	punct	_	_
26	is	be	AUX	VBZ	Mood=Ind|Number=Sing|Person=3|Tense=Pres|VerbForm=Fin	27	aux	_	_
27	missing	miss	VERB	VBG	Tense=Pres|VerbForm=Part	21	acl:relcl	_	_
28	long	long	ADV	RB	Degree=Pos	27	advmod	_	_
29	before	before	SCONJ	IN	_	32	mark	_	_
30	your	your	PRON	PRP$	Case=Gen|Person=2|Poss=Yes|PronType=Prs	31	nmod:poss	_	_
31	eyes	eye	NOUN	NNS	Number=Plur	32	nsubj	_	_
32	notice	notice	VERB	VBP	Mood=Ind|Number=Plur|Person=3|Tense=Pres|VerbForm=Fin	27	advcl	_	_
33	it	it	PRON	PRP	Case=Acc|Gender=Neut|Number=Sing|Person=3|PronType=Prs	32	obj	_	_
34	.	.	PUNCT	.	_	6	punct	_	_
```

## Pragmatics {#pragmatics}

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No stored speech act for this sentence.

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| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 1 | **is** | present | the best trick |  |  | a whisper |  | aloud, read *property* | tree rules |
| 2 | **trip** | present | your ear |  |  | the gap |  |  | vn run-51.3.2-2 «NP V PP.location»: agent=Theme over gap=Trajectory |
| 3 | **miss** | present · progressive | the |  |  |  |  | long *property* | vn admire-31.2 «NP V that S»: agent=Experiencer |
| 4 | **notice** | present | your eyes | ear |  |  |  |  | vn see-30.1-1 «NP V S»: agent=Experiencer it=Stimulus |
| 5 | **work** |  | your |  |  |  |  |  | nom work «act intransitive»: poss=agent |

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One row per clause the reader finds. «not said here»: a role filled from the clause above. «roles by»: a VerbNet class and frame when one fits the verb, else the reader's rules on the tree.

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**Licence: [CC BY-SA 4.0](https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/)**, as the whole of Mova corpus 0.4, of which this treebank (the agreed school, `mova-school-agreed-en.conllu`) is part. The lessons were written for Mova's primary school. Sentence `school:english:043-editing-and-redrafting.lesson:2`.

**The tree:** Mova annot: Rust (en) → Haiku 5.5 (medium, Batches API) patches; gates UD 2.18; agreed by treeagree rules (Stanza, Trankit, spaCy trf): R6-punct-agree ×1. **The frames** are read from the tree by Mova's frames reader (`prag`) when this page is built, the lesson read in order, so a pronoun may be resolved from an earlier sentence.

See the [release 0.4](https://md.mova.elamur.ai/free/en/releases/0.4/).

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